Many people love go traveling when they are on vacation or on the Chinese New Year, it seems that it can help them feel relax and forget the irritating work. Some people like backpack travel and some people like tour travel, and there are some differences and similarities between them.
First of all, take spot for example; you can go around everywhere you want when you’re on the backpack travel as long as you know how to go there. On the other hand, you don’t worry about your trip when you are join the tour travel because the travel agency have been already planning what you do, what you eat, and where you sleep every day.
Second, tour travel may spend you more money than backpack travel. Because you should give a lot of tips and some of activities you want to do are need to pay by yourself.
No matter what you choose, both two ways can make us feel more vitality and when you are traveling you can learn the different culture and life style between us.
If I have chance to travel abroad with my friends I will choose backpack trip because it is very cool to trip by ourselves. I think it must be a very exciting and adventure trip for us.
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